The Kill Zone: The Great F-Bomb Debate

The Kill Zone: The Great F-Bomb Debate: " James Scott Bell In John G's Friday post, he gave us clips of his most recent editorial letter. One of the admonition..."

Book Review: PLEASE IGNORE VERA DIETZ by A. S. King

Book review by the Bookshelf Detective, Kim Tomsic
PLEASE IGNORE VERA DIETZ by A. S. King

Five Lollipop Rating


The dramatic tale of high school senior Vera and the confusing mind game following the death of her best friend Charlie. Charlie and Vera’s friendship started at age four. When they were five and ten and twelve, their friendship was about sleepovers, a tree house, and keeping secrets (like the one about Charlie’s missing underwear or the other about Vera’s mom). When Vera and Charlie enter high school, their friendship is tainted by unspoken crushes, lies, betrayal, and addiction. While Vera tries to compartmentalize the dirty secret behind Charlie’s death, she is forced to confront the truth about other relationships in her life. Author A.S. King is a master of voice. She makes the reader easily believe that an eighteen year old girl, a dead boy, and even a pagoda are narrating. Hard issues are dealt with in an authentic and even funny manner, but it’s the hopefulness that keeps the pages swiftly turning.
Genre:  Y.A.  (Knopf books for Young Readers October 12, 2010 ISBN 978-0-375-86586-2 Hardcover $16.99)

Oprah's No Phone Zone to NO HOME ZONE

Escalating No Phone Zone Pledge to a No Home Zone Crusade by Kim Tomsic

The influence Oprah harnesses by speaking a few words is nothing short of extraordinary. It’s like watching the wind whip a flock of moths on a new course. People don’t complain about the infectious sway her opinion holds over the majority because Oprah has proven to be a brilliant steward of her powerful gust. Currently, Oprah is using her persuasive energy to encourage people to give up a wide spread addiction: cell phone use while driving. Her campaign is called No Phone Zone.

Forfeiting phone use in the car is a sandy pill to choke down—many of us have become accustomed to the convenience of getting our to-do list done on the road. It’s handy to respond to emails at red lights, search movie listings while waiting for trains to pass, and make quick return calls at toll booths.

Many Internet users are on the No Phone Zone campaign trail; a shocking email blast is currently filling in boxes. It shows graphic images of a decapitated person and what’s left of his mangled car after an accident—one which was allegedly caused by a texting driver. Oprah may be on to something with her No Phone Zone campaign, but I wonder if the crusade should be on a broader spectrum…something on the magnitude of No Home Zone.

No Home Zone

Driving down the road feeling traumatized by the above mentioned email blast, I was on the lookout for dangerous cell phone users. As I arrived at a red light, I took an anxious peek to my right and sure enough, a teen was chatting on her Hubba Bubba pink phone; to my left, there was a business man with a phone, no wait, not a phone but an electric razor clutched in his hand.

I looked in my mirrors for an escape route from these dangerous drivers only to discover the car behind me was powered by a college student. She was brushing her teeth and spiting into an empty water bottle. When the light turned green, the shaver pulled away as he gave his chin a clean mowing.

I continued driving, nervous now of cell phone users and of people seeking to complete their morning hygiene while blazing down the road. Slowing to a safe distance from the shaver, talker, and brusher, I decided to change lanes. I signaled and glanced to my blind spot only to discover a thirty-something man holding a magazine on his steering wheel. Really? Reading while driving! My heart now bumping hard in my chest made me think I’d be guilty of heart attack while driving. I safely made a left turn, but felt overwhelmed with the amount of passing drivers toting Big Gulps and coffee mugs (I’ve heard the dangers of driving with hot coffee is equal to drunk driving).

Oprah’s campaign, No Phone Zone, invites people to “pledge to make [their] car a No Phone Zone.” I urge you to make it a No Home Zone—leave your novel, tooth brush, coffee mug, and coupon clipping at home. Oprah’s commitment states, “Beginning right now, I will do my part to help put an end to distracted driving by pledging the safest driving behavior I can commit to.” For more information, visit http://www.oprah.com/packages/no-phone-zone.html.

National Book Award Winners

National Book Award Winners were announced on November 17, 2010
and the winners are...

Attention Writers: 60 Agents at One Conference!

Writer's Digest Conference

THIS EVENT DATE HAS PASSED; WATCH AGAIN FOR LIST OF ATTENDING AGENTS IN 2012
New post for the conference January 20-22, 2012

(YOU MISSED IT   :0(    January 21-23, 2011)

LIST OF AGENTS WHO TOOK PITCHES:

Andrée Abecassis (Ann Elmo Agency, Inc.)

Jason Allen Ashlock (Movable Type Literary Group)

Bernadette Baker-Baughman (Victoria Sanders & Associates)

George Bick (Doug Grad Literary Agency)

Brandi Bowles (Foundry Literary + Media)

Jamie Brenner (Artists and Artisans)

Regina Brooks (Serendipity Literary Agency)

Ann Collette's (Rees Literary Agency)

Marisa Corvisiero, Esq. (L. Perkins Agency)

Jennifer DeChiara (Jennifer DeChiara Literary Agency)

April Eberhardt (Kimberley Cameron & Associates)

Diana Fox (Fox Literary Agency)

Diane Freed (FinePrint Literary Management)

Adam Friedstein (Anderson Literary)

Mollie Glick (Foundry Literary + Media)

Doug Grad (Doug Grad Literary Agency)

Katie Grimm (Don Congdon Associates)

Naomi Hackenberg (The Elaine English Literary Agency)

Molly Jaffa (Folio Literary Management)

Meredith Kaffel (Charlotte Sheedy Literary)

Mary Kole (Andrea Brown Literary Agency)

Katie Kotchman (Don Congdon Associates)

Jud Laghi (The Jud Laghi Agency)

Sarah LaPolla (Curtis Brown, Ltd.)

Sandy Lu (L. Perkins Agency)

Donald Maass (Donald Maass Literary Agency)

Alexandra Machinist (Linda Chester Literary Agency)

Victoria Marini (Gelfman Schneider Literary Agents)

Jim McCarthy (Dystel & Goderich Literary Management)

Kate McKean (Howard Morhaim Literary)

Peter Miller (PMA Literary and Film Management, Inc.)

Robin Mizell (Robin Mizell Ltd.)

Shawna Morey (Folio Literary Management)

Emmanuelle Morgen (Judith Ehrlich Literary Management)

Dana Newman (Dana Newman Literary)

Kathleen Ortiz (Lowenstein Associates)

Lori Perkins (L. Perkins Agency)

Adriann Ranta (Wolf Literary Services)

Janet Reid (FinePrint Literary Management)

Chris Richman (Upstart Crow Literary)

Rita Rosenkranz (Rita Rosenkranz Literary)

Elizabeth Winick Rubinstein (McIntosh & Otis)

Katharine Sands (Sarah Jane Freymann Literary)

Katie Shea (Caren Johnson Literary)

Jessica Sinsheimer (Sarah Jane Freymann Literary)

Michael Strong (Regal Literary)

Becca Stumpf (Prospect Agency)

Emily Sylvan Kim (Prospect Agency)

Suzie Townsend (FinePrint Literary Management)

Joanna Volpe (Nancy Coffey Literary & Media Representation)

Marissa Walsh (FinePrint Literary Management)

Elisabeth Weed (Weed Literary)

Roseanne Wells (Marianne Strong Literary Agency)

Natanya Wheeler (Nancy Yost Literary Agency)

John Willig (Literary Services, Inc.)

Christine Witthohn (Book Cents Literary Agency)

Michelle Wolfson (Wolfson Literary Agency)

Don't let this ship sail without you!! (your choice...fishing boat or cruiseliner :0)

CLICK HERE TO LEARN ABOUT THE AGENTS AND THEIR SPECIFIC INTERESTS

Writing Wars: And then he saw...Blah, Blah, Blah

Writing Wars: And then he saw...Blah, Blah, Blah: "They should make more of these. Brevity is Key Shorter is always better when it comes to writing. Makes things less redundant, faster to ..."

Current Top Sellers on Kindle

This Week's Kindle Bestsellers (updated December 20, 2010 )

The Confession:  A Novel by john Grisham

Unbroken by Laura Hillenbrand

The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo - Stieg Larsson (Knopf)

4-Hour-Body:  An Uncommon Guide to Rapid Fat Loss, Incredible Sex, and Being Super Human by Timothy Ferriss

Cross Fire by James Patterson

The Girl Who Kicked the Hornet's Nest - Stieg Larsson (Knopf)

Decision Points by George W. Bush

Dead or Alive by Tom Clancy

The Girl Who Played with Fire - Stieg Larsson (Knopf)

Port Mortuary by Patricia Cornwell

Room:  A Novel by Emma Donaghue (see review on this blog)

The New York Times

Hell's Corner - David Baldacci (Grand Central)

The Wall Street Journal

Mahjong Solitaire by Mobigloo

Heir by Grace Burrowes

Free Kindle Books

Freedom:  A Novel (Oprah's Book Club) by Jonathan Franzen

The Emperor's Tomb by Steve Berry

The Perfect Christmas by Debbie Macomber

J.K. Rowling, Rejection, and Lucky Number Thirteen

J.K. Rowling is known as the billionaire author of the Harry Potter series. But in a less fruitful period of

her life, her agent informed her that she’d never make any money writing for children. 

Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone was rejected by twelve publishers—they said the story wasn’t commercial enough. However, Bloomsbury, the thirteenth publisher that she queried with the story, took a chance and rode the Harry Potter train all the way to Gringotts.


The author of the seven-book phenomenon (or eight if you count the play) is so well known today that "J.K. Rowling" is included in Microsoft’s spellcheck. The writer’s real full name is  Joanne Rowling, no middle initial. The K comes from the name of her favorite grandmother, Kathleen. She chose to go by the penname J.K. because her publisher advised that her boy readers may not want to read a work by a female author. Unprecedented sales prove that nobody is bothered by her gender.

Rowling said she finally knew she was successful when she arrived in America for a book signing tour promoting her second book, Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets. She rode in a car in downtown New York City and noticed an enormous line trailing down the street and wrapping around the block. She turned to her publisher and said something like, “What’s going on? Is there a big sale?” But the car pulled in front of Barnes & Noble and she realized the line was for her.

The idea to write the Philosopher's Stone (which happened to be the original title of her first book), came to Rowling when she was a broke twenty-five-year old, freshly divorced from a thirteen-month marriage, and the mother of a tiny baby. She was penless (and penniless), riding a train from Manchester to London, and the ideas swirled in her head: I can write about a boy wizard, and this will be how the school will look, and there will be four houses, and these will be the classes he can take.

Rowling wrote her first book by hand in noisy cafes while baby Jessica slept in a carriage by her side. By the time Rowling completed her seventh and final book (Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows), she sat it in the peaceful quiet offered at The Balmoral, a beautiful hotel in Edinburgh, Scotland. She says when she completed the seventh book, she was initially elated, but in an interview with Oprah she said, “it was a bereavement.” Harry Potter was her escape and when she was done, she cried in a way that she had only cried one other time in her life—the time when she lost her mother.

She says that if her mother had not died, there would probably not be a Harry Potter. She says her experience with knowing death appears on every other page in what Harry has to deal with. Other life events, such as her experience with clinical depression, have inspired characters such as the Dementors. Although Mrs. Rowling said she could write an eighth, ninth, or tenth Harry Potter book, she probably won’t. She doesn’t commit either way, but she feels number seven was it.

However, there's an update since this blog post was written - 2016 saw the release of  Harry Potter and the Cursed Child by J.K. Rowling, John Tiffany and Jack Thorne. According to Toyzk "Although it wasn’t part of the original 7-book series, Harry Potter and the Cursed Child is a widely popular addition to the Harry Potter series. It begins where the Deathly Hallows epilogue left off, with Harry Potter, Ron Weasley, Hermione Granger-Weasley, and Draco Malfoy sending their children off to the magical Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry." 

Ms. Rolwing says she will go on to write other things and she gives herself permission to not feel compelled to replicate the phenomena that occurred with the Harry Potter series. The last words in her seventh Harry Potter book say, “all is well” and it seems for Ms. Rowling, all is well,too.

My two brushes with Harry Potter fame:

1. I had breakfast with Arthur Levine (he was the American publisher of the Harry Potter series when he headed Arthur A. Levine Books). Okay, we were at separate tables, but we were inches apart. I could have reached over and borrowed his salt shaker. ☺ Ms. Rowling says that Arthur Levine is one of her two best friends.



2. At the lake in front of my house in Boulder, Colorado, I bumped into actor Devon Murray, the star who plays Seamus Finnigan. He was carrying a fishing pole as we passed one another on the path. When I saw him, I said hello while my brain tried to catch up. I knew that I knew him…but from where? I thought perhaps he was a waiter at one of the restaurants I frequented. But when we spoke, and I heard his thick accent, the cobwebs cleared from my mind. 

Author Buzz...it has nothing to do with Merlot

This came from an ad in Publisher's Marketplace (today's Publisher's Lunch)
"'Even if a publisher is on board, Authorbuzz.com is a great complement to their efforts. With my novel The Last Ember, Authorbuzz.com was able to use the great early reviews to push my debut thriller out. I was thrilled to wind up on the NYT bestseller list, which then led to extended co-op.' -- Daniel Levin
Reach 3,000 booksellers, 10,000 librarians, over a half million readers. And if it's a bookclub book - 25,000 bookclubs.

Write to them at Authorbuzzco@gmail.com for a menu and ideas. They're booking now for January – May. Including a special holiday month long effort.

Nerd, Origin of the Word, And Proof that I am One

I can't help myself...I love knowing interesting facts.  But what if my so-called fun facts are only interesting to me?  Does anyone else smile when they learn things like where the word "nerd" came from, or am I the only wordnerd who cares (well, me and David Cook...remember, he called himself a wordnerd). 
The first documented use of the word Nerd is in 1950 in the Dr. Seuss story, If I Ran the Zoo.  One blogger who goes by the name Bron has used his engineering brain to track the origin of the word "nerd" and he points out its first use was by Dr. Seuss.  "A boy named Gerald McGrew made a large number of delightfully extravagant claims as to what he would do, if he were in charge at the zoo. Among these was that he would bring a creature known as a Nerd from the land of Ka-Troo."  So a nerd (per the illustrator) equaled this grumpy character pictured below (oh the power of illustrators).
After Dr. Seuss, Newsweek used the word in an October 1951 issue to mean a person who is "a drip or a scurve." The St. Joseph, Michigan, Herald-Press used the word again in June 1952, again with a negative connotation.  For deeper study (and argument) into the origin of the word, visit the nerd expert's blog



There's No Place Like Gnome

I went to the mall yesterday and sure as sherbet, they were already piping in the Christmas tunes.  My blood pressure climbed as I worried about what to purchase for my sister and her husband (they've already purchased Segways; if that doesn't say it all, I'll provide a TRANSLATION-they have everything found in a mall including the mall cop's transportation). More worries...what to buy for  Dad...another grilling gift? And what am I going to buy to bring to my crazy white-elephant-party? 
Instead of taking a dose of Caduet, I lowered my blood pressure (and please check with your doctor to determine if this is the proper course for you) by reading a review of Chuck Sambuchino's book How to Survive a Garden Gnome Attack: Defend Yourself When the Lawn Warriors Strike (And They Will).   It was the perfect answer to my gift giving concerns.

Preparation is the key to success.  How to Survive a Garden Gnome Attack is the only manual of its kind and your loved ones (especially those who have everything) will appreciate this hilarious book at Christmas (or sooner!). 



How to Find a Literary Agent by Kim Tomsic

Would you like to find that perfect literary agent for your project?  This article is packed with useful advice like please don't use glitter and rainbows to get their attention.

Start your quest for an agent by researching sources like The Guide to Literary Agents (GLA). Your goal is to search the pages and find an agent who is reputable and fits the type of book you are writing (picture book,young adult novel, romance novel, biography, historical fiction, cookbook, etc.). 

In the GLA, you will find a wealth of useful information including: agents name and email address; information about the agency for which they work; the agent's client list; their website/blogsite; if they're a member of various associations (i.e. SCBWI); how the agent prefers to receive submissions (i.e. snail mail or email/ query and first five pages/query only/attachments or no attachments/ etc.) and **vitally important** the type of projects the individual agent prefers (i.e. Middle Grade or YA or Picture Book, etc.) . You can also research agents and their specific taste on their agency website and on #MSWL which stands for Manuscript Wish List.

Once you find the agents who you believe would be a great advocate for your project, you begin by writing that agent a query letter. Remember, it's crucial that your research was precise and you learned about the agent prior to submitting. If your project is a cookbook, you shouldn't send a query letter asking for representation to an agent who is looking for YA dystopian material. If you are pitching a picture book, you shouldn't write to agents who only want to represent memoirs. All your research should be complete prior to writing that query. 

Your query letter is the first impression you'll make, and agents want to deal with smart and informed people. They want to know that you’ve selected them for a specific reason vs. throwing darts. You can be sure that if your query reads like you’ve queried them and every agent on the planet, they won't waste their time with a further look.

Do:  Craft your winning query letter by telling the agent:
1. Why you chose to query them (a simple one-line sentence);
2. The logline, working title, genre, and word count of your manuscript;
3. What your manuscript is about in one interesting paragraph;
4. What's in bookstores now that is similar to your manuscript (so they can decide if it's a money maker) OR what books your book would be shelved next to (and please don’t say it’s the next Harry Potter);
5. If you've been previously published;
6. Your education, affiliations (i.e. SCBWI), or special credentials as it might pertain to this manuscript;
7. A courteous closing and how to contact you.

It's ideal to break your query letter down into three paragraphs: the hook, the book, and the cook.

Don'ts

Here are a few things not to do—no matter how tempted you are—if you want to stay professional:

Don’t tell the agent that your mom, sister, classroom, and priest LOVED your book.
Don’t call your manuscript a fiction novel (that’s like calling it a story story or a book story).
Don’t submit to multiple agents WITHIN the same agency.
Don’t pack an envelope and mail a query to a "green" office IF that agent only accepts email submissions.
Don’t add attachments UNLESS the agent says they prefer submissions that way.
Don’t have your email filtered to their trash by adding attachments, submitting to multiple addressees, or by adding special stationary and do-dads to your email…these gadgets often land your masterpiece in a SPAM folder, and the agent never has the opportunity to see your brilliant work.
Don’t address your letter "Dear Agent." Remember, address to their name and spell it correctly. The agent needs to know you’ve selected them.
Don’t add glitter and rainbows to your submission; be professional and let your writing do the talking.

For a peek at  How to Write a Query Letter, 

http://kimscritiquingcorner.blogspot.com/2013/06/ive-seen-lot-of-query-letter-posts-but.html

For more information on writing query letters, I think Nathan Bransford's award winning blog is excellent (by the way, he just left Curtis Brown, so don't query him).

p.s. Make sure you check out predators and editors to avoid disreputable agents.

What to Take When You Must Evacuate

Two times in two months, I was almost evacuated from my home due fires that threatened my neighborhood.  On one of the occasions, my family and I were actually hosting another family that had been evacuated; if we had to leave, it would have been round two for them.

As the fire edged closer and we waited for word from the rangers, we watched two CH54 helicopters and another smaller helicopter gather water from the lake across the street.  The two CH54s dipped their huge tube in the lake, sucked up water, and flew off to douse the fire.  It would take eight minutes for them to return.  The smaller helicopter dunked a dangling bucket as it's water gathering method.  

The helicopters were my cue that this was serious business and I needed to kick into gear.  With help from my already-evacuated friends, we made a pile of the important things to take in case we needed to abandon our home. 

Here's our list of things to put into your car if you have been given a warning (and time) that an evacuation is pending.  All the rules change if danger is eminent...if there's a fire in your home, forget all and get the heck out!

Irreplaceable pictures
medications
pets stuff (food, cages, liter boxes, leashes, pet bed, medications)
Passports
checks
Financial Paperwork
Insurance Policies
Wills
Deeds
social security cards
birth certificates
Jewelry (especially personal pieces)
computer
heirlooms
a suitcase of clothes

what am I forgetting?
  

Nathan Bransford

Wow! I can't believe he's leaving the industry! Today is Nathan Bransford's last day as a literary agent for Curtis Brown.  He is also the creator of one of THE best blogs regarding the do's and don't's in publishing (i.e. good query advice, etc.) Fortunately, his blog will still be active at http://blog.nathanbransford.com/.  I just hope it's still packed with publishing tidbits and not tech-y stuff.



Today, the blog reads:

Nathan Bransford

San Francisco, CA

United States

Nathan Bransford is the author of JACOB WONDERBAR AND THE COSMIC SPACE KAPOW, a middle grade novel about three kids who blast off into space, break the universe, and have to find their way back home, which will be published by Dial Books for Young Readers in May 2011. He was a literary agent with Curtis Brown Ltd. from 2002 to 2010, but is now a publishing civilian working in the tech industry. He lives in San Francisco with his wife Alison Presley.

Personality Test by Kim Tomsic

As the bookshelf detective, I love anything with the title SNOOP.  Dr. Sam Gosling, an associate professor of psychology at the University of Texas at Austin, has a new book Snoop:  What Your Stuff Says About You.  He says that we express our self (deliberately as well as accidentally) by our things, so what you have in your desk, on your wall, on your counter all speak about your personality.  I wonder what my tin Wrigley's gum container, snow tubing photo, pink retro mouse pad, harmonica, and Vic's espresso frequent punch card (all sitting on my desk)say. Snoop is a fascinating read on its own merits.  I think it could also serve as a great tool for writers who want to develop believable characters.  Whatever your purpose, have fun snooping.

Guide to Literary Agents

Guide to Literary Agents

Guest column by Dan Lazar on writing a great query letter.

Contest! Entry deadline today!

Are you writing a YA Novel?  Here is your chance to enter a free contest and possibly win a critique of your first ten pages. 

MEET YOUR JUDGE!

Tamar Rydzinski, a literary agent
at the Laura Dail Literary Agency in NYC.
Clients include:  Inara Scott , DelCroix Academy THE CANDIDATES and Jen Calonita SLEEPAWAY GIRLS

THE CONTEST (click this link)
Guide to Literary Agents seventh (and free!) "Dear Lucky Agent" Contest is posted on the GLA blog. This is a recurring online contest with agent judges and super-cool prizes. Here's the deal: With every contest, the details are essentially the same, but the niche itself changes—meaning each contest is focused around a specific category or two. So if you're writing a young adult novel, this seventh contest is for you!
 
HOW TO SUBMIT




E-mail entries to seventhagentcontest@gmail.com. Please paste everything. No attachments.



WHAT TO SUBMIT



The first 150-200 words of your unpublished, book-length work of young adult fiction. You must include a contact e-mail address with your entry and use your real name. Also, submit the title of the work and a logline (one-sentence description of the work) with your entry.



Please note: To be eligible to submit, I ask that you do one of two things: 1) Mention and link to this contest twice through your social media—blogs, Twitter, Facebook; or 2) just mention this contest once and also add Guide to Literary Agents Blog (www.guidetoliteraryagents.com/blog) to your blogroll. Please provide link(s) so the judge and I can verify eligibility. Some previous entrants could not be considered because they skipped this step!





CONTEST DETAILS



1. This contest will be live for approximately fourteen days—from Oct. 21 through the end of Wednesday, Nov. 3, 2010, EST. Winners notified by e-mail within three weeks of end of contest. Winners announced on the blog thereafter.

2. To enter, submit the first 150-200 words of your book. Shorter or longer entries will not be considered. Keep it within word count range please.

3. This contest is solely for completed book-length works of young adult fiction.

4. You can submit as many times as you wish. You can submit even if you submitted to other contests in the past, but please note that past winners cannot win again.

5. The contest is open to everyone of all ages, save those employees, officers and directors of GLA's publisher, F+W Media.

6. By e-mailing your entry, you are submitting an entry for consideration in this contest and thereby agreeing to the terms written here as well as any terms possibly added by me in the "Comments" section of this blog post. (If you have questions or concerns, write me personally at literaryagent@fwmedia.com. The Gmail account above is for submissions, not questions.)





PRIZES!!!



Top 3 winners all get: 1) A critique of the first 10 pages of your work, by your agent judge. 2) A free one-year subscription to WritersMarket.com.

I Can't Wait to Get Ditched!

Yes! It's true...I can't wait to get Ditched! Ditched is Robin Mellom's debut YA novel being published by Disney Hyperion (editor Christian Trimmer) with a release date set in 2012. It's about a high school girl who wakes up in a ditch the morning after her prom. She can't remember the past 12 hours, what happened to her prom date, and how she ended up with a tattoo (of a punk Tinkerbell!). If I can base the future of a book on the tone of a blog and a crazy premise, Ditched promises to be energetic, funny, and wildly entertaining. Great job Robin!

p.s. Publisher's Marketplace calls it THE HANGOVER for teens

Ghost Story!

The Ghost Over Boulder Creek has been unleashed. Elain Pease's newest middle grade novel is now available at your favorite bookstore. Book signings are also happening this weekend, October 30, 2010 from 12:00pm to 2:00pm at Barnes &Noble in Boulder (2999 Pearl Street, Boulder 303-444-0349) and again on Sunday, October 31at Borders at the 29th Street Mall in Boulder.

After surviving the Washita River Massacre, Run Through Fire, a half-Cheyenne, half-white boy uses the ploy that he's a captured white and humbly follows Buffalo Bill across the plains in search of Run Through Fire's father. Run Through Fire hopes his father can help free the imprisoned survivors of his tribe. His mother is among them. When Run Through Fire arrives in Boulder, the ghost-like images that have haunted him during his journey prove to be more than warnings. Encourages discussions about prejudice, the westward movement and Manifest Destiny.

Read (and rock out!) with Taylor Swift!

Read (and rock out!) with Taylor Swift!

Taylor Swift and Nick Cannon Promote Reading

Scholastic's 90th anniversary literacy campaign featured a live interview with Nick Cannon and Taylor Swift who say, read every day and live a better life.  For information on seeing the video, visit Scholastic.  This is a tool teachers can use in the classroom to promote reading.

National Novel Writing Month

November is National Novel Writing Month.  What's that?  It's a thirty day challenge, beginning November 1st, to sit down and write a 50,000 word novel.  The rules are simple, write write write; write new material  (not something you're currently working on or something you're tweaking), and have fun.  Expectations:  a bunch of fluff will be written because there is no time to reread and edit every (any!) detail, but your creative juices will flow and you may surprise yourself.   Published novels have come out of this yearly challenge.  For more details, visit  http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/whatisnano.

Everything Elephants

I heard an NPR commentary by a clever scientist who said there is so much water in a cloud, he can only logically discuss the measure in elephant units.   Now, whenever it rains, I think of elephants.  And it's raining today, so naturally I feel compelled to offer elephant reading recommendations.

Here are my three favorite elephant books...I promise hours of fun reading!!
Modoc by Ralph Helfer
The Magician's Elephant by Kate DiCamillo
Water for Elephants by Sara Gruen

Judy Moody Alert!

Judy Moody Fans...Did you know that one of the producers of Precious:  Based on the Novel Push by Sapphire is currently filming a movie based on the Judy moody books by Megan McDonald?  Fun!

I can't wait for the release of Animal Tracks by Kelly Sheahan

From the SCBWI regarding the Sue Alexander Award:

2010 Winner


Kelly Sheahan or her manuscript Animal Tracks.


Here’s what our judges had to say:


"Animal Tracks is set in a vividly rendered Alaskan wilderness. It's filled with page-turning tension, peppered with humor, and peopled with delightfully quirky characters. This middle grade adventure novel features a timid young science nerd whose struggle to survive and make sense of his parents’ disappearance engages instant reader sympathy and promises a fun and intriguing journey."

A little about Gary Paulsen

from http://www.bookshelfdetective.org/ by Kim Tomsic
It was a cold Minnesota winter’s day that caused a very young Gary Paulsen to duck into a building and flee the harsh weather. The building happened to be a library. When the librarian offered him a book and a library card, magic ignited. Paulsen discovered his passion for reading, and books became his escape from a less than ideal home life.


It’s no wonder Paulsen fell in love with books—they helped quench his need for adventure. When he was just a fourteen-year-old boy, he ran away from home and joined a traveling carnival. Later, he served as a soldier, and after that he raced the Iditarod—twice!  For those who are unfamiliar with the race, the Iditarod is not for the weak.  It's a sled race with 15 mushers and it spans over a 1000-mile course running from Anchorage to Nome. But you don't need to spend the $250,000 it cost to train for the event to know the thrill.  A fan can experience every drop of Paulsen’s blood, guts, and tears when they read his entertaining books on wilderness and adventure.

Perhaps when Paulsen writes, he feels compassion for the young man he wanted to be or for the kids who desperately need a break from their real world. He has dedicated countless hours writing for young people and has created more than 175 books. Gary Paulsen is considered one of the most important people in children’s literature. In addition to the numerous awards he has won, three of Paulsen’s novels were Newbery Honor Books — Hatchet, Dogsong, and The Winter Room.

National Book Award Finalists Announced

http://www.bookshelfdetective.org/ has the info on the National Book Award Finalists

Young People’s Literature:


Paolo Bacigalupi, "Ship Breaker"

Kathryn Erskine, "Mockingbird"

Laura McNeal, "Dark Water"

Walter Dean Myers, "Lockdown"

Rita Williams-Garcia, "One Crazy Summer"




Fiction:

Peter Carey, "Parrot and Olivier in America"

Jaimy Gordon,"Lord of Misrule"

Nicole Krauss, "Great House"

Lionel Shriver, "So Much for That"

Karen Tei Yamashita, "I Hotel"



Nonfiction:

Barbara Demick, "Nothing to Envy: Ordinary Lives in North Korea"

John W. Dower, "Cultures of War: Pearl Harbor, Hiroshima, 9-11, Iraq"

Patti Smith, "Just Kids"

Justin Spring, "Secret Historian: The Life and Times of Samuel Steward"

Megan K. Stack, "Every Man in This Village Is a Liar: An Education in War"



Poetry:

Kathleen Graber, "The Eternal City"

Terrance Hayes, "Lighthead"

James Richardson, "By the Numbers"

C.D. Wright, "One with Others"

Monica Youn, "Ignatz"






The National Book Awards will be announced at a ceremony in New York on Nov. 17. At the event, Tom Wolfe will receive the National Book Foundation’s Medal for Distinguished Contribution to American Letters and the Literarian Award for Outstanding Service will be presented to Joan Ganz Cooney, a founding producer of "Sesame Street."

Contest!!!

From http://www.bookshelfdetective.org/

Writer's Digest is holding its sixth annual fiction writer's competition. Entry deadline is November 1st.
A Short Story Competition from Writer's Digest


Compete and Win in All 5 Categories!


•Romance

•Mystery/Crime Fiction

•Science Fiction/Fantasy

•Thriller/Suspense

•Horror



The Grand Prize-Winner will receive a trip to the Writer's Digest Conference in New York City, $2,500 cash, $100 worth of Writer's Digest Books and the 2011 Novel & Short Story Writer's Market.

Entry Deadline: November 01, 2010.

SCBWI Winter Conference

The Bookshelf Detective wants you to know that
registration has begun for the

 12th Annual SCBWI Winter Conference.  Please know that the pre-conference writing intensive typically fills up within the first 5-7 days, so my advice is to visit www.scbwi.org and jump in before its too late to sign up for this extra class. 
WHEN:  JANUARY 28-30, 2011
WHERE:  New York

The elite line-up of keynote speakers include Jules Feiffer (cartoonist, playwright, screenwriter, and children's book author and illustrator), Lois Lowry (two-time recipient of the Newbery Medal), Linda Sue Parks (Newbery Medal Winner and author of the ninth book in the series 39 Clues), R.L. Stein (sold over 400 million books with Goosbumps, Fear Street, The Nightmare Room, Rotten School, and Mostly Ghostly) and Sara Zarr (A National Book Award Finalist, Cybil Award Finalist, and Kirkus Best Book recognition).

Agents you can meet: 

Ginger Clark of Curtis Brown LTD:  She represents science fiction, fantasy, paranormal romance, literary horror, and young adult and middle grade fiction. In addition to representing her own clients, she also represents British rights for the agency’s children’s list.

Dan Lazar from Writers House:  Daniel Lazar is a senior agent at Writers House, one of the industry's largest and oldest literary agencies. His list includes a variety of commercial and literary fiction for children and adults. For children's books, he represents primarily middle grade and YA. Recent and upcoming titles include Newbery Honor-winner Savvy by Ingrid Law (Dial/Walden); The Last Invisible Boy by Evan Kuhlman (Atheneum); Billy Bones by Chris Lincoln (Little Brown); Mike Steller: Nerves of Steel by KA Holt (Random House); and The Dork Diaries by Rachel Renee Russell (Aladdin).

Jim McCarthy from Dystel & Goderich Literary Management:  Jim McCarthy interned for Dystel & Goderich Literary Management while studying urban design at New York University. Upon graduating in 2002, Jim realized he would much rather continue working with books than make the jump (as he had originally intended) to the field of city planning and has been with the agency ever since. As an avid young adult fiction reader, his interests encompass both literary and commercial works. He is particularly interested in urban fantasy, paranormal romance, horror, gay and lesbian fiction, and absolutely anything that can make him laugh out loud.

For more on conferences, visit me, Kim Tomsic, at www.bookshelfdetective.org

Ingrid Law and Spunk and Bite

Ingrid Law, author of the new release Scumble and author of Newbery Honor book Savvy recommends Spunk & Bite as a tool for writers.

Picture Book Discussion Panel Excerpt

**UPDATE November 15-December 15, 2014** Bid on a Picture Book Manuscript Critique with one of the publishing professionals donating their time and talent in the #KidLitForHaiti Auction at the following Link:

http://kimscritiquingcorner.blogspot.com/2014/11/kid-lit-for-haiti-online-auction.html

Click Here to go to: Picture Book Manuscript Critique:Critique with Melissa Manlove editor of Chronicle Children's Books; 
Jen Rofe agent with Andrea Brown Literary Agency;
Denise Vega-author and two-time winner Colorado Book Award
Stephen Mooser-co-founder SCBWI and author of 60 + books
and more!

And now:

A few words from an SCBWI discussion panel featuring four esteemed speakers:
Arthur Levine (Arthur A. Levine books), Melinda Long (teacher and award winning best-selling author), Eve Bunting (esteemed author of more than 100 books for young readers), and Kadir Nelson (famous award winning illustrator)

GREAT PICTURE BOOKS

QUESTION: What makes a great picture book?
Athur Levine: Distinction and originality.
Kadir Nelson: The book needs to speak to both a personal truth and a universal truth.
Eve Bunting: It must have heart and jolt of emotion. When you write ask yourself, “Is this worth
saying?”
Melinda Long: It has to appeal to children and adults. Bring in humor or love, something so the adult
can say, “I remember when I felt that way.”

QUESTION: When do you know it’s time to write?
Eve Bunting: When something jolts me, I see if the feeling lasts.
Melinda Long: When I have something inside and I have to get it out on paper and I don’t feel good until
I do.

Extra words from Mr. Levine and Mr. Nelson:
Athur Levine: Remember that your words must be apparent in your text because author has no control over the illustrations. (This makes me think of advice from Linda Arms White. She says to forget adverbs and adjectives when writing picture books (maybe one per story is okay). She advises your verbs are your work horses, so pick wisely (no “to be” verbs).
Kadir Nelson: The book illustrator’s job is not to redundantly tell the same story as the author.

Fanilow: A Tribute to Richard Peck

Fanilow: A Tribute to author Richard Peck

By Kim Tomsic



I knew I’d look for him the minute I walked into the SCBWI conference ballroom. I only hoped he'd live up to the giant I had created in my imagination. Author Richard Peck has given me many gifts: laughter, tears, and adventures with characters like Grandma Dowdel, Blossom Culp, and Tilly Pruitt. As the two-time winner of the Newbery Medal, the Margaret A. Edwards Award, the ALAN Award, and the Edgar Allen Poe Award, he has received acknowledgement from those far greater than me, but I needed to tell him how much I admire him, too; and I needed to say thank you.



By day, my husband bonds with my son over paintball wars, air soft guns, and pocketknives. But by night, I bond with my child through the magic of literature thanks to authors like Richard Peck. Evening time is when my son becomes riveted as I read aloud, hijacking a Peck character’s voice, and we sail on a Huckleberry Finn-type adventure. The enchanting time-travel journey provided by Richard Peck pushes far beyond anything found in even a Fodor's Guide.



When I arrived at the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators National Conference (www.scbwi.org) and walked into the Hyatt ballroom, I scanned the 950 people mingling and sipping coffee. There was no sign of Richard Peck. But after I found a seat, superhero music blasted from speakers. Applause filled the room and the conference faculty marched to the stage, one by one speaking into the microphone, each offering a single word for the weekend. Literary agents spoke hopeful words like “yes!” and editors said happy words like “chocolate.” Richard Peck reached the microphone and said, “friend;” then he raised his eyebrows and added, “and that is not a verb.” The crowd exploded in laughter.


I waited all Friday morning and afternoon to shake Mr. Peck’s hand, the time passing with conference-filled fun. I belly-laughed all through Sherman Alexie’s presentation (a speech as funny as his book The Absolutely True Story of a Part Time Indian) and I was dazzled by the stimulating art of David Wiesner (Flotsam). I concluded my morning trifecta (comedy, art, music) with the delightful and irreverent tunes of Frank Portman (King Dork). And then 3:15pm rolled around, and I bounced my way to Richard Peck’s seminar entitled Setting: the Landscape of Story, I found the great man greeting people as they walked in the door, thanking folks for attending his seminar. He was thanking us!


Sitting in class beside me was Newbery Medal winner, Linda Sue Park (A Single Shard)--now I had star dazzling all around me. She fiercely jotted notes and was as enamored with Peck as I was. Another Newbery winner was in the room, though I can't remember who. Throughout the lesson, I was impressed by Mr.Peck and thought, here is a true gentleman plucked right out of yesteryear; he’s like one of his very own characters (not Grandma Dowdel of course). Another attendee, who accurately read the admiration plastered on my face, told me that one time Mr. Peck had agreed to speak at her regional conference. Later it was publicly announced that Richard Peck won the ALAN Award. The ALAN ceremony was scheduled on the same day as her conference. Sure enough, she received a phone call from Mr. Peck. She expected him to cancel. Instead, he said he was calling because he realized the events overlapped and that he wanted her to know he did not intend to cancel his commitment. She was flabbergasted, but recovered by saying that he needed to receive his award. She canceled on him.



The presentation ended. The time to shake my hero's hand finally arrived. Like a star struck teenager, I asked Mr. Peck to sign my copies of A Long Way from Chicago and A Year Down Yonder. I don’t know what came over me--I’m not even from the generation I’m about to reference--but the first thing that gushed from my unbridled mouth was, “I’m your biggest fanilow!” His eyebrows bounced twice and he graciously smiled. With a sparkle in his eyes, he said, “Why thank you; and I know what that means!” He looked right at me when he talked and not at the swarm of people all wanting a piece of him. He was patient and pleasant and everything I hoped for. I was respectful and moved along to allow others a turn to prattle, but I watched as he generously gave every last "fanilow" time for questions and photos.



I had a chance to redeem my goofy first impression. Later that evening, I entered an elevator and there he was. Could I be cool about the situation? No! Earlier in the day, I had enjoyed watching author Ellen Hopkins (Crank) on the podium; she danced and skipped when she talked about the joy of writing, so I danced my way into the elevator; I did a jig a-la Ellen Hopkins, and I announced to the passengers, “It’s Richard Peck! It’s Richard Peck!”



Later I sent my thirteen-year-old daughter a text, “I just met Richard Peck!!! That’s equivalent to you meeting a Jonas Brother.” The reply came back, “Ha Ha Mom. U R so weird.” I knew she was secretly impressed since (years ago) she was the first to introduce a Peck book to our family (Here Lies the Librarian). When I called home, my son was outwardly wowed and said, “Make sure you get his autograph!” I did better, I got a photo—not a good one, because I didn’t have the heart to ask for a second chance (which he would have indulged), but I have a treasured photo nonetheless.



Over the conference weekend, Richard Peck escalated to the highest level of my admiration. I saw him many times in the audience. He was referenced by author after esteemed author. Men want a bromance, women adore him, and children are captivated by his writing. My son told me, "You should give him a hundred dollars, Mom." Without a doubt, we all love Richard Peck. We love his charm, his beautiful and gentle heart, his chivalrous nature, his witty quips, and his gift to entertain.



At the end of the SCBWI Conference, Richard Peck gave a humble presentation to a captivated and packed audience at Sunday’s Golden Kite luncheon. He delivered an entertaining, funny, and tear-tugger keynote address and while the audience froze under his spell, waiting for more, he quickly and modestly exited the stage before what followed—an explosion of applause and a standing ovation.



Mr. Peck says that in every story, nobody grows up before they have to, but eventually somebody has to. In my childish and bubbling awe of the master, I knew it wasn’t me growing up anytime soon.


Some of my favorite books by Richard Peck include: A Long Way from Chicago (Newbery Honor winner), A Year Down Yonder (Newbery Medal winner), and Here Lies the Librarian.

Books for kids

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Here's what’s on my bookshelf:

Picture Book Picks:

A Visitor for Bear by Bonny Becker (Caldecott Honor)

Pirates Don’t Change Diapers by Melinda Long

Piggies in the Pumpkin Patch by Mary Peterson and Jen Rofé

Chapter Books:

According to Humphry books by Betty Birney

Middle Grade Books:


Savvy by Ingrid Law (Newbery Honor)
A Long Way from Chicago by Richard Peck (Newbery Honor)
The Graveyard Book by Neil Gaiman (Newbery Medal)
The Year the Swallows Came Early by Kathryn Fitzmaurice (winner of numerous awards for Best Middle Grade and also named as the 2010 Bank Street Best Book)
Paris Pan Takes the Dare by Cynthea Liu (a dozen kid's choice awards)
The Absolutely True Story of a Part Time Indian by Sherman Alexie (National Book Award Winner)
When You Reach Me (currently my favorite in this list!) by Rebecca Stead, Newbery Medal

Young Adult Choices:

Down Sand Mountain by Steve Watkins (Golden Kite Award)

The Earth, My Butt, and Other Big Round Things by Carolyn Mackler (Printz Honor)

Thirteen Reasons Why by Jay Asher (this book has received more than twelve awards recognizing it as a top choice in Young Adult Literature)

The Hunger Games (trilogy) by Suzanne Collins

Oscars with Altitude

It was a newspaper sweeps morning. I thought I saw my friend Megan (who is also my daughter's mentor),on the cover of today’s newspaper (Life & Arts section). Reading the title: Oscars at Altitude” made me realize the photo is actually a picture of Megan’s sister, Sarah, producer of "Precious Based on the novel 'Push' by Sapphire". Megan and Sarah are Boulder locals as is Louie Psihoys (The Cove) and both films have nominations (best picture, best documentary film, best actress...) in the 82nd annual Academy Awards. Megan says she'd really love to see Gabby (Gabourey Sidibe) win tonight. "If people knew how witty and intelligent Gabby is in real life, they'd understand what a stretch it was to accomplish acting in her leading role in 'Precious.'" Tonight, Mateo restaurant in Boulder is celebrating our local celebrities: Sarah Siegel-Magness, Gary Magness (Precious), and Louie Psihoyos (The Cove) in a red carpet Oscar bash event with a big screen TV and five star cuisine.
But that's not all; I said it was a sweeps morning...turning to the Local section of the Daily Camera, I discovered a piece on my daughter under Student Spotlight. She was interviewed regarding her Capstone project and the money she is raising for Haiti.

National Grammar Day

It's a Grammar Free-a-Palooza!


In celebration of National Grammar Day, Grammar Girl is giving out free book samples galore! Feel free to forward them to all the grammar lovers (and to those who, er, need the help) in your life.

From Grammar Girl's Quick and Dirty Tips for Better Writing

Chapter 1: Dirty Words ("Affect" versus "effect," "less" versus "fewer," "whose" versus "who's," etc.)

Chapter 3: Let's Get It Started (Can you start a sentence with "however," "hopefully," or "because"?)

Chapter 9: Work It (Tips on becoming a better writer)

From The Grammar Devotional

The first ENTIRE month of entries ("Supposedly" versus "supposably," "blond" versus "blonde," and 26 other grammar tidbits)

What stage have you achieved in your spiritual journey?

BOOK REVIEW: Where is God in Your Life?

Do you feel stuck in your quest to know God? Have you been around a person who has such warm and beautiful energy that their pores breathe perfect and radiant peace? Fear does not define any part of their life; they are not driven toward recognition yet they clearly and brightly reflect God and you can’t help but notice them. You may pray, go to a church, and have a great family, but you know you don’t feel satisfied on the same level as your glowing friend.

Where is God in your Life: Three Retreats in Christian Spirituality by Susan M. Provost is a new book available on Amazon. Ms Provost’s book explores the teachings expressed by Janet Hagberg and Robert Guelich and examines the six stages of a person’s faith journey: (1)Recognition of God; (2)The life of discipleship; (3)the productive life; (4)the journey inward and meeting the wall; (5)the journey outward; (6)and the life of love. Ms. Provost challenges that most people can achieve stages one through three within their church community, but there is little support currently available to help a person realize stages four through six. Where is God in your Life and the workshops designed around Ms. Provost’s teachings offer a platform to help people arrive at the final three profound levels when traveling the road to faith.

Mrs. Provost says, “the problem that many people face, who are looking to move forward on their spiritual journey, is where to begin.” You can begin on page one, but Ms. Provost advises before cracking open the first pages of her book that you throw away any notion you may have about a punishing God and open your heart to discover the God of love.

The book includes three different two-day workshops for varying levels of a person’s faith experience (novice to veteran). The main topics include: spirituality, understanding the soul, Christian spirituality, God’s presence, prayer, and spirituality within the community. Where is God in your Life can be read individually or it can be used as the foundation in a retreat setting. Where is God in your Life provides seminar plans that are organized in such detail that the group leader simply needs to show up—the readings, the music, the time schedule, the ice breaker activities (including a crazy one with a roll of toilet paper) are prearranged to achieve an insightful, fun, and structured experience.

Mrs. Provost says that “our culture encourages the need to be constantly in motion,” but she also asserts that “we cannot notice God working in our lives when we do not take the time to stop…these workshops are designed to give those searching for a relationship with God the tools to know where to begin and how to proceed on their spiritual journey…” Mrs. Provost wants you to have the tools to become the radiant stage six person described in the first paragraph; to learn how to surrender to God unafraid and with your eyes wide open.

I look forward to the debut of Robin Becker's Brains

(from Janet Reid's blog)
sounds like a fun read!

Fiction: Debut
Robin Becker's BRAINS: a zombie memoir, the first-person account of a college professor-turned-zombie who retains his sentience and recruits others like him on a heroic quest to fend off the living while searching for the meaning of un-life, to Gabe Robinson at Harper, in a nice deal, for publication in Summer 2010

RE: Escalating No Phone Zone Pledge to the No Home Zone Crusade

The influence Oprah harnesses by speaking a few words is nothing short of extraordinary. It’s like watching the wind whip a flock of moths on a new course. People don’t complain about the infectious sway her opinion holds over the majority because Oprah has proven to be a brilliant steward of her powerful gust. Currently, Oprah is using her persuasive energy to encourage people to give up a wide spread addiction: cell phone use while driving. Her campaign is called No Phone Zone.

Forfeiting phone use in the car is a sandy pill to choke down—many of us have become accustomed to the convenience of getting our to-do list done on the road. It’s handy to respond to emails at red lights, search movie listings while waiting for trains to pass, and make quick return calls at toll booths.

Many Internet users are on the No Phone Zone campaign trail; a shocking email blast is currently filling inboxes. It shows graphic images of a decapitated person and what’s left of his mangled car after an accident—one which was allegedly caused by a texting driver. Oprah may be on to something with her No Phone Zone campaign, but I wonder if the crusade should be on a broader spectrum…something on the magnitude of No Home Zone.

Driving down the road feeling traumatized by the above mentioned email blast, I was on the lookout for dangerous cell phone users. As I arrived at a red light, I took an anxious peek to my right and sure enough, a teen was on her Hubba Bubba pink phone; turning to my left, I saw a business man with a phone, no wait, not a phone but an electric razor clutched in his hand. I looked in my mirrors for an escape route from these dangerous drivers, and in the car behind me, there was a college student brushing her teeth and spiting into an empty water bottle. When the light turned green, the shaver pulled away, giving his chin a clean mowing. I continued driving, nervous now of both cell phone users as well as people seeking morning hygiene. Slowing to a safe distance from the shaver, talker, and brusher, I decided to change lanes, so I signaled and glanced to my blind spot only to discover the thirty-something man reading a magazine while driving! With my heart now bumping hard in my chest, I safely made a left turn, but felt overwhelmed with the amount of passing drivers toting Big Gulps and coffee mugs (I’ve heard the dangers of driving with hot coffee is equal to drunk driving).

Oprah’s campaign, No Phone Zone, invites people to “pledge to make [their] car a No Phone Zone.” I urge you to make it a No Home Zone—leave your novel, tooth brush, coffee mug, and coupon clipping at home. Oprah’s commitment states, “Beginning right now, I will do my part to help put an end to distracted driving by pledging the safest driving behavior I can commit to.” For more information, visit http://www.oprah.com/packages/no-phone-zone.html.

The conveniences cell phones offer in seemingly innocuous circumstances may tempt you to the next step—using features not just at red lights or toll booths, but while driving. It’s devilishly tempting to just click on that yoga app and check the next time for a Corepower class, and it’s oh so enticing to glance at your screen when you hear the beckoning bell, alerting you of a new message; and when you read the message, “want to have lunch”, it’s quick to zap in the three simple letters to reply “yes.” Do you hear the many justifiers used to make cell phone use while driving sound okay—just click, glance, brief response. So go ahead and make the pledge; people are proven to be more likely to follow through on a good idea when they make an oath. And in addition to choosing the “no texting while driving” option, mentally commit to the vow of no flossing, tweezing, reading, sandwich making, and hair braiding while driving too.